Sunday, August 22, 2010

The come back !

How could the life end up having such an ugly face ?

How could the life in life vanish without a trace ?


Supreme it is, is it brighter than a fading new moon?

Surreal it is, is it snowing in the mid June ?


Sometimes its forlorn like an old and a dieing man.

Sometimes it outshines everything like a gold and a diamond.


When it ends, it ends with a painless slaughter.

On the verge of getting finished, it starts a new chapter.


The walls are caving in, it could collapse any minute,

The grief is gripping, he has eaten the forbidden peanut.


Ugly as it may look, it has his demon here,

Silly as it may sound, he has to shout the truth in his ear.


One day he will rule the odds out and make himself proud.

Because there is a star shining behind every black cloud.

9 comments:

  1. so its good to start an end..

    Liked it. Obviously.

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  2. I'm not too big on poems... but "There is a star shining behind every black cloud.".. I think that's going to be the next every-cloud-has-a-silver-lining. :)

    Cheers,
    Annie.

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  3. My question for you is: What goes in your mind when you are writing such high intensity lines? Anger. Pain. Frustration. Envy? I mean, if you could point out those exact emotions! Maybe then i may understand the common link between people like Eminem and you. I would really like to delve deep into the psychology of such people, if you know what i mean! *Sigh*

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  4. Liked it :)
    Nice rhyming lines specially the first six :)

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  6. the flow and rhyme is really nice!

    liked how you ended it.On a good note :)

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  7. tym fo another comeback!! srsly!!

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