Saturday, March 20, 2010

FACES !

In the last post I just meant that there are people who hate me for nothing and that's probably because they don't like my face or my traits. But trust me, I am happy in fact more than happy.It's just one of those lines (if you remember), which are true and applicable any day...

"Sometimes I hate myself in the mirror,
Sometimes the mirror hates me when I go nearer"

In simple terms, If you plot a graph between "Weekdays and how I hate my looks" the graph would be exponential or if you really want to break it down then put the values and check in y=e^x or for some decent weeks consider, m= 1 and c = 0 ..in Y=mX+C...WOW that wasn't simple, was it ?..

Alright, so after reading all the nice comments..I have to share a poem which I wrote LONG back, it's amateurish and not my type, but co-incidentally on a similar subject..




FACES

Sorrow in his face, wrapped in mournful trace,

he is poor and far from any worldly allure.

Luxury shines in his face, a winner in his race,

he is rich and far from any vulnerable itch.

Struggle in his face, he is a backbone and he is a base,

he is from middle class and he belongs to the mass.

Innocence appears in his face, can’t tie his shoelace,

he is a kid and a phase similar to whatever we did.

Stubborn is his face sometimes with a brace,

he is a teenager indulged in a superficial pleasure.

Responsibility in his face tucked in a formal dress,

he is a man and works as hard as he can.

Helplessness signs in his face, ready for death to embrace,

he is old, and his life could have been better than being on hold.

Shyness in her face and the beauty which you can’t replace,

she is a girl & if she were to be a gem, she would have been a pearl.

Toughness in his face and the power you can’t replace,

he is a boy and he is the synonym for joy.



11 comments:

  1. m likin dis face...amateur??..naah!!
    cute!!i cudnt hv ever imagined of u writin sthn lyk dis...yaah ryt...nt ur type!!its cute cute cute!!!

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  2. sometimes we just write what we are feeling at that particular moment in time n that takes the form of poetry.. n digging at past(n yet to be revealed) scribblings is a good way 2 unwind..
    n the lines are a typical reflection of the then frustration(that's how it seems!)

    ..n i liked the graph imagery :D

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  3. It is as hard hitting smoothie as it can be!

    Not amateurish at all. And it is slightly your types and slightly not your types.

    Cheerz! :)

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  4. abee 2nd time commenting...

    2nd para was very geeky and definitely ur type :-P

    And the poem was very good,indeed not ur type!! But i liked it...

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  5. nope...definitely not amateur. Nicely penned buddy!

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  6. It wasnt your types so cudnt connect much to it. i dunno why i felt im reading it for the first time now.

    coz i remember the first time u showed it to me, i had said its weirdly good, so i'll stick to that only.. :-w

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  7. why so less comments?
    waise u look so fat fb wale pic mei in your blog. make ur thing narrow naa...

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  8. why so less comments?
    waise u look so fat fb wale pic mei in your blog. make ur thing narrow naa...

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  9. why so less comments?
    waise u look so fat fb wale pic mei in your blog. make ur thing narrow naa...

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  10. yupp y so less comments yaha pe???n y no reply frm peter??nt fair!!

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