Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Without one !

If your gain is my loss, then may be I am a loser.
If my curses are your blessings,then baby I am an abuser.

It's your mess,I won't clean it up,no I won't even dare,
As if I am only bad to shoes, and you are all heart-fair

I redeem you, yeah may be I am a little sick.
How can I blame you, my life is itself a kick.

I am sick of these games, don't play it anymore for god's sake,
was it me or was it you ? or was it a mutual heart-break?

The lights turn out & I am over like a one night show,
Look here's the reality, I am your friend-turned-foe.

Ain't it funny for you? but for me it's no-fun,
coz everyone's got a deal,but I dealt it without one.

36 comments:

  1. coz everyone's got a deal,but I dealt it without one.
    Nice poem wth true feelings of a lover who has been ditched in love.
    Keep writing such dukh bhari poems heheehhee

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  2. I bow down to you...

    *Blows a kiss* --- I am yet again in love with another something you wrote :)

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  3. are you heart broken ?

    on a lighter note : koi baat nahi main hu na , u can run , u can hide , but you cant escape .... ;)

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  4. dekha baba i told u its an awesomeeeeeee poem...chal la chocolate la nd ya CCD yaad rakhna:P

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  5. I like! I like!
    Everytime I read one of your creations, I can't stop wondering just how many moods and perspectives you are able to explore via your rap creations/poems.
    Awesome.

    Great style to express your thoughts.

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  6. Ah...a different emotion. This one's like out of a modern rap rather than a gangsta one :D
    Good stuff!

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  7. poem toh mast thi..but i hope this is just a poem and not inspired by ur own life!

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  8. hey dere gr8 expressn of feelings... nice poem......
    so didnt u express dis to d one concernd !

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  9. hey dere gr8 expressn of feelings... nice poem......
    so didnt u express dis to d one concernd !

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  10. Liked the poem...very heart felt...
    But on a more serious note, I wouldn't really like to see more poems of this sort on your blog :)

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  11. was expecting to read a lighthearted post here...the usual funny Peter posts :)
    but anyway its good,...is this fiction? or real btw?

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  12. now i sense somethin fishy...ur genre is becoming defined day by day...mmm...what's cookin man'?

    but i must say...i actually tightened by eyebrows while reading it...amazing expression i must say

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  13. Wonderful creation..lovely..

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  14. Hat's off!!

    Witty way 2 represent a heart-break..

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  15. Call it a closure and Move on! Do not rant :| ;) Good luck, if ur gettin over...and cheers if u already have !

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  16. Okay.. world knows.. I am bad with poems.. so I will take it as rap.. but how do you sing that.

    Give me a start Peter the rapper :D

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  19. @ Sweta

    :) thnx

    @ abhinav

    I appreciate that u appreciate !

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  20. @ Harshita

    hehe thnks :)

    @ Akansha

    yeah tell me about it ;)

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  21. @ shruti

    I got it :)

    @ I'll try to be

    I like that song :P

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  22. @ Sweta

    haan haan dekha..bahut bahut dhanyavad :)

    @ Prianca

    Well, yeah I am wondering too as how this comes so naturally to me !
    thnx :)

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  23. @ shaunak

    It wasn't a RAP dude :(

    @ sugar cube

    thnks :)

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  24. @ Apparently

    yeah just a poem :)

    @ Anonymous

    thnks :)

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  25. @ Mads

    yeah wud try not writing it for next few mnths for sure :)
    thnks

    @ Pj

    if u can relate to it then, it's real else it's a fiction !

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  26. @ Chitwan
    nthng buddy just a post :)
    chill :P

    @ ankita

    thnk u :)

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  27. @ Pooja

    thank you :) ur poems are better but !

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  28. @ Anonymous

    WELL, the kind of words you have used makes me wonder who you are ?
    Do I know u ?
    I guess I do !

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  29. @ Scattered thoughts

    naah it can't be a rap !!
    just a poem...I am bad in writing RAPS .. seriously !

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  30. not a RAP per-se, but every poem has a different feel to me. Some sing to me like a ballad, some rap it out to me, raw and untamed. This was that.

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