Friday, January 23, 2009

WHO LET THE FOG OUT ??

It faded, before it could emerge.
It is soothing rhythm, but sounds like a dirge.

It's so gloomy but i see,it's so clear,
It's far-off but relatively near.

Some SPY at work or a secret admirer?

Blandishments are cliche, and I need a thought stirrer.

A gruesome cruelty , isn't my cup of tea.
I need to change, before I start being ME.

The fog won't clear and i won't again fly up.
Was I dreaming reality, or did I just wake up ??

48 comments:

  1. I love poems that rhyme.. This one is a bit foggy that makes it much more interesting..
    well done... keep it up..
    I didnt hate it.. }:-)


    the pic is cooool...

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  2. when i read the title i thought hv to b a funny post..
    but it was diff...
    nyways..
    well written man !
    n ya nice title ;)

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  3. it was different, as all ur poems are...
    i really cudnt get the meaning in the poem overall...n im stuck at this line--i need to change, before i start being me--

    am confused how to interpret it.. :-ss im thinking of lots of things...confused che...

    :"> yes im dumb :"> :P

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  4. oh yeah, title suits the post perfectly well...

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  5. Great Rhyming thr budyy ...but what's the pic about ??

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  6. @ abhinav

    Same here, there is only one poem which i have written which is widout any kind of rhyming :D

    thnks for not hating it :D

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  7. @ amrita

    welcome to the zone of shocks and surprises :D

    and thnks for liking it :D

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  8. @ Mads

    u gave ur verdict ..now do i need to add anythng else :-w

    thnks anyways :P

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  9. @ anurag

    thnks man
    the fog is about the bad patch i am having ryt now :(

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  10. n dats ur best till date! too good!

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  11. @ neha

    nahi be
    jus waiting for this fog to get cleared :D

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  12. u used that contradiction logic in some lines here also... good...

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  13. seems like the sequel of your "contradictions in me" :)

    good as always

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  14. @ sarath

    yeah but that is not intentional ..it jus happnd :P
    anways both are me only :D

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  15. @ chitwan

    not a squeal but ..yeah feel is the same somehow :|

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  16. lovely poem..

    all of us have fog in us..
    i think even the PM of India has fog in him. bichara he gone thru surgery..

    at times fog help us to interpret who we are. makes us think wht we really want and expect from life.

    its good to have clear goals.. i still dont have mine :(

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  17. had to read it 3 times before i could understand the correct meaning . somehow the last two lines seemed to be part 2 of "contradictions" .

    keep writing .confusing yet mind boggling in a way few people can come up with.

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  18. & i got that " I need to change before i started being ME "

    it did seem very true , you know. it's like if we didnt mould ourselves into the norms of this world maybe something drastic would happen .

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  19. @ nidhi

    yeah that's ur perspective ..but i basically meant ..my bad phase by saying FOG :|

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  20. @ i'll try to be truthfull

    ohh evryone is finding it as the second part of contradiction ..but srsly it has nothng to do wid that poem ...it's just about my recent bad patch and mixed bag of situations


    and yeah that part which u mentioned .,....has somethng to do wid my resolutions this year :D

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  21. nahi yaar , be yourself is the most cliched thing which i can say.

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  22. nice lines...appreciate identifying with those lines actually...

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  23. @ i'll try to be truthful

    point hai :-?

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  24. @ hobo

    thnks but the post is much more than that ...the picture is of secondary importance

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  25. @ john

    and that's wat is is important isn't it ?

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  26. I need to change before I start being me..
    that was the hit!
    Fab,dude!..
    This was staunch and sturdy..and totally great!

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  27. bro, lovely poem... id think u just woke up :P

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  28. @ sawan
    thnks :P
    hmmmm :-?
    y so ?

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  29. simple.. cos i dnt wana think that u were dreaming reality :P

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  30. @ sawan

    apparently in both the cases nothing changes ..but still i would like to belive that i was ..dreaming :D

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  31. Ah!! This is one of those poems that are complete within themselves. I got nothing to say on it because I know where it has come from :-)
    I like it !

    :-D

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  32. it has come from HYDERABAD :-P
    he he thnks :D

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  33. hmm..thoda samjha...yeh bouncer tha..samajh nai aaya
    :P

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  35. @ neha

    abe samjhaney se essence chala jata hai poem ka :-P

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  36. hey...an intriguing one, there!!!

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  37. Another meaningful poem from you. :)

    I loved this line in particular :
    "I need to change, before I start being ME."

    Itney din ho gaye...ab ek aur likho yaar... :)

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  38. @ harshita

    thnks, sabhi ko yahi wali line acchi lag rahi hai:D
    kya baat hai !

    yeah m having xams ryt now not updating ..will be back soon
    !

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  40. Nice poem .. short but hitting; made me remember something I wrote:

    I look around and see the crowd of blank faces, I despair for a human in this sea of humanity … suddenly the guiltless face, the human face … my friend …. We the living!

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  41. @ som

    hmm but your lines sound on a different subject all together ..which made me remember a poem written by me called FACES :D

    anyways ...it's just the way u look at it ;)

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